Landing Page Review

What it does

Your landing page isn't broken in 14 places. It's broken in one place. The other 13 things people will tell you are wrong are noise.

This skill audits 7 sections: the hero, the social proof, the offer framing, the CTA, the price stack, the FAQ, and the bottom funnel. Names the ONE leak that's actually losing you conversions. Then gives you 3 ranked rewrites in your voice you can paste straight in.

Honest diagnosis. No "your design is great" softening. If the hero is dead, you'll know.

What's inside

• The 7-section audit — Hero, Pain, Promise, Proof, Process, Price, CTA — each scored Strong / Medium / Weak
• The 5 leak types — Hero Leak, Promise Leak, Proof Leak, Process Leak, CTA Leak
• The mobile-first check — Most underperforming pages look fine on desktop and convert at 0.5% on mobile because the hero is below the fold
• The "one page, one offer, one CTA" rule — Why multiple CTAs dilute conversion
• Three ranked rewrites — Quoted exact lines from the page + the replacement copy in the user's voice